Chiara's Cool Coast

where the coast meets the sea of knowledge

3 Comments

  1. Hi chiara (again)
    This poem is really good. I like how you had each line started with the same letter in each word and at the end it was just BANG!
    Phoebe! 😀

  2. I like how you used a lot of alliteration, like “Slop, Slither, scream!” and “Chitter chatter chop!”
    Very clever!

  3. I really liked how you used a lot of alliteration. I also liked when you just said bang at the end as it put a twist on it.
    Keep it up
    Lilly
    🙂

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